One thing I am curious about with this document is purpose. This is interesting data, certainly, but I wonder what this document accomplishes. What problem does it solve? In terms of visuals, there is a lack of contrast between some of the text and its background, which hurts the document's readability. Also some of the text is pixilated or otherwise messy. Consider creating your own text. You might even want to make a standard, high-contrast label so that all the text is equally readable.
One thing I am curious about with this document is purpose. This is interesting data, certainly, but I wonder what this document accomplishes. What problem does it solve? In terms of visuals, there is a lack of contrast between some of the text and its background, which hurts the document's readability. Also some of the text is pixilated or otherwise messy. Consider creating your own text. You might even want to make a standard, high-contrast label so that all the text is equally readable.
Submitted by jtirrell on Sat, 09/15/2007 - 19:46.