Data Map - Second Draft
Submitted by rsaba on Wed, 09/12/2007 - 19:28.
Thanks for the comments,
.Thickened pointer lines to countries
.Thickened translation borders
.Added distinction to translated regions
.....changed color of countries
.....changed color of border lines
.Removed random shading pixels (cleaned up image)
.Removed white space surrounding border
.Italicized country languages
You might consider color-coding the highlighted countries, so that they are more distinguishable. You might also think about cleaning up the text boxes. They are a little crowded, and the different text items could be differentiated a little more. Also, make certain to check over all your text for issues like correct spelling. Overall, however, this document seems to be going along well.
Submitted by jtirrell on Sat, 09/15/2007 - 19:41.