Julie's Second Draft
Submitted by julie4646 on Thu, 09/13/2007 - 16:02.
This is what you would see if you click on the push pin of Chicago and then on the sub-selection of Navy Pier.
This is what you would see if you click on the push pin of Chicago and then on the sub-selection of Navy Pier.
Because this is a mock-up, I am a little limited in the comments I can give. I am curious about the purpose and audience for this document. Is it a website for children to show their parents? Also, where are you getting your information about the "top ten traveled cities," and how are you picking the attractions? Additionally, you might want to think about your color scheme and readability. This looks like it might be headed in the right direction, but keep asking yourself what this document is trying to do that no other work does.
Submitted by jtirrell on Sat, 09/15/2007 - 19:08.