English 420Y - Business Writing Online - Letter draft

Letter Draft

mkoppelm — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 16:06:32 -0400

Corporate Com Draft

mfaslam — Sat, 07 Jul 2007 02:44:24 -0400

Would really appreciate some feedback!

Suchet — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 23:40:23 -0400

This is my business latter please feel free to leave any feedback you want

whinchcl — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 23:35:55 -0400

This was pretty difficult for me, so suggestions would be most appreciated. Thanks.

RachB487 — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 23:06:25 -0400

Any comments or suggestions are welcome!

ecorriga — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 22:55:29 -0400

Please offer comments for my letter.

esnyder — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 22:48:23 -0400

My letter is attached. I feel like my middle paragraph could be two paragraphs but am unsure. Please help!!

mcmichel — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 22:40:54 -0400

Please leave some comments. Thank you.

mcalmet — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 22:18:23 -0400

Please give me any feedback

nlievens — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 22:13:08 -0400

Here is my letter, any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks, Nick