Class Thesis Revisions

Post your revisions of the the class thesis sheet below.

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The shortsightedness of today’s shoppers blinds them by the benefits of purchasing food online.

Number 6

More effort should be put into treating seasonal affective disorder, a debilitating condition that affects many people in northern countries such as Norway and Sweden during the winter months.

thesis 1

Even though the District of Columbia is denied voting representational for Congress, they still must pay federal income taxes and local taxes.

Sentence 2

If a woman suffering form postpartum psychosis does something terrible, such as injuring or killing her child, she should obviously recieve help.

4. Giving up privacy rights

4. Giving up privacy rights so that the U.S. government can find and convict terrorists is against the foundation of America.

# 8

The U.S. AIDS epidemic that broke out in 1980 is completely different from the Black Death that occured in the Middle Ages.

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10. Myths were the basis of most reputations for the heroes of the Old West.

number 3

Marcus Garvey made contributions to the African American population by founding the Universal Negro Improvement Association and initiating the popular back to Africa movement.

# 7

Many Republicans throughout American history recognized the importance of protecting the environment, but with the change of time, today’s Republicans usually side with business interest rather than with environmental ones.

#9

Because the phrase “separation of church and state” appeared in a letter from Thomas Jefferson and is not in the U.S. Constitution, the United States should not press it on the people or ‘add’ it to the Constitution.