Brian Otten:
Submitted by InvisiblebiRON on Thu, 09/13/2007 - 13:38.
-I decreased the size of the circles surrounding the numbers
-Added captions describing each step
-Added an additional column
-Inserted images to show what my intentions were
-Added titles to each row
-Pictures might seem small but this data map is intended for a poster size so it would be scaled up accordingly.
This looks like it's coming together well. You seem to have isolated your audience and purpose. Think about small things, like where this document will be deployed. This will help you with matters such as size (what is the reading distance for this document?). Also, check your text to make sure that you are using things such as punctuation consistently.
Submitted by jtirrell on Sat, 09/15/2007 - 19:15.