This looks interesting. My main question about this document would be what its overall purpose is; what is this document trying to accomplish? The information looks really interesting, but as our Design Plan Tips page states, "The key is not making the most interesting map you can think of—the key is identifying and solving a problem." Right now, this document is unfinished, so perhaps its purpose will be clear in the end, but it is still a good idea to keep in mind that our documents should be driven by purpose. Otherwise, the visuals look mostly clean and clear.
This looks interesting. My main question about this document would be what its overall purpose is; what is this document trying to accomplish? The information looks really interesting, but as our Design Plan Tips page states, "The key is not making the most interesting map you can think of—the key is identifying and solving a problem." Right now, this document is unfinished, so perhaps its purpose will be clear in the end, but it is still a good idea to keep in mind that our documents should be driven by purpose. Otherwise, the visuals look mostly clean and clear.
Submitted by jtirrell on Sat, 09/15/2007 - 18:30.