This looks like a good start. I'm curious where this document might be found. What is it doing that isn't being done already by other documents? Right now, the visuals look pretty clean. There is some low contrast between the text near the bottom and the background. This can affect readability, particularly if this document is to be read from a distance. Also, you'll want to make sure that all your text is grammatically sound. Things such as "a shoulder length" instead of "shoulder-length" and switching between 2nd person ("you") and 3rd person ("the shooter") take away from the effectiveness of the document.
This looks like a good start. I'm curious where this document might be found. What is it doing that isn't being done already by other documents? Right now, the visuals look pretty clean. There is some low contrast between the text near the bottom and the background. This can affect readability, particularly if this document is to be read from a distance. Also, you'll want to make sure that all your text is grammatically sound. Things such as "a shoulder length" instead of "shoulder-length" and switching between 2nd person ("you") and 3rd person ("the shooter") take away from the effectiveness of the document.
Submitted by jtirrell on Sat, 09/15/2007 - 18:22.