Purpose. To help people sucessfuly plan and execute a first date with minimal problems, and to hopefuly leave the opening for a second date. I hope to help readers to loosen up and "fly right" if i may quote Nat King Cole. These instructions should help anyone successfuly put on a first date and not look like a crazy person... Unless your into that sort of thing...
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analyzing kenan
Purpose was the only rhetorical element covered, but it is covered well.
Every other rhetorical element is not covered, so those are the ones I would like to know more about, specifically the medium he plans to use.
Since I don't know much about this instruction set, I can't really compare it to my idea for this project, although I guess because I'm covering a dance and he is covering a social situation, maybe somebody who is interested in one would be interested in the other.
I don't know enough about this idea to guess how it might change if aspects of it were changed.
Peer Review
1. The element that is covered most thoroughly is purpose. I think planning a first date is a great idea because a lot of people, guys and girls, can become nervous at the prospect of trying to impress a new love interest. I like the Nat King Cole quote and think it adds a "zinger" because instructions or plans can tend to be boring for a reader.
2. There are a few elements that have been left out. I would like to know most about your specific audience (males, females, age?) and what medium. It will definitely be different if this is online compared to something like a "self-help" pamphlet.
3. These instructions connect to what I am doing because it applies to a wide audience and people from all different backgrounds will come across this problem.
4. I think the instruction set will differ greatly if it is specified to a male or female audience. Both genders have different expectations and styles of doing things, but ultimately are seeking companionship.