Design Plan #1
I. Statement of Purpose
1. To inform the audience on how to train a dog to walk on a leash with out it pulling you.
2. The audience will feel confident in walking their dog and have a better understanding on how their dog learns.
3. Dog training can be a grueling process. There is nothing like trying to take a nice relaxing walk after a day of work and having your dog walk you the entire way. By teaching yourself that a dog learns best by using positive reinforcement, it will make your life a lot easier and walks with your best friend will soon become an enjoyable part of your day!
4. The best possible outcome is that the owner will successfully train their dog how to walk on a leash.
5. The worst possible outcome is that the owner will not successfully train their dog how to walk on a leash.
6. Communication needs to be very organized and clear. The steps need to be simple and not too long so that the audience can read the next step quickly while training.
II. Audience
1. The audience can be anyone young or old, male or female. They could be knowledgeable about dog training or have no knowledge at all. The audience may not want to spend a lot of time on training and need something that will fit into their schedule. Some people may be very frustrated and looking for something that works.
2. The most important characteristics so far are that the instructions need to be simple, something that someone can fit into their schedule.
III. Context
1. The occasion of communication is anyone interested in training their dog to walk on a leash.
2. The place of communication will in the neighborhood, park, ect.
IV. Description of Overall Strategy
1. The audience will need to know some basics. What tools they will need in order for the training to work: 6 foot leash, pronged collar (explain how to adjust), & some tasty treats!
2. Step by step instructions on how to begin along with pictures.
3. Pictures will be taken of every step with the dog.
V. Choice of Medium
1. Online webpage with instructions and pictures
2. Printed handout with instructions and pictures
3. Video
VI. Ideas of Arrangement
1. Tools: needed: 6 foot leash, pronged collar, & tasty treats
2. How to adjust the collar
3. Important info before beginning:
-When your dog does what you want marks with “YES” then pause and reward with a treat. Dogs have 3-5 SECONDS to make an association between what is asked and the consequence. If you say “YES” and give a treat at the same time your dog will think he is being rewarded for taking the treat.
-When your dog DOES NOT do what you want, DO NOT SAY “NO”. Instead say “AHH-AHH” or IGNORE the behavior & DO NOT REWARD!
-Dogs learn BEST when using positive reinforcement!
-ONLY give your dog a treat when he does what is asked!
3. The Process:
-Directions are organized and clear.
VII. Testing Communication of Production
1. In order to make sure that the piece of communication is successful is by having a few friends/classmates try out the instructions to see if it makes sense.
2. To make sure the piece achieves what that statement of purpose is would be to have a friend with a dog try out the instructions and see if they can successfully train their dog to walk on a leash without pulling.
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Design Process #2
I. Statement Purpose
1. To train a dog how to walk on a leash with out it pulling the client.
2. The audience will feel secure that the dog will not tip them over or pull them but to walk beside the wheel chair.
3. In order to ensure safety of the client the dog needs to be very well trained. Being that the clients are using wheel chairs it is important for the dog to understand he cannot pull the owner.
4. The best possible outcome is that the owner will successfully be able to take their dog on a walk without pulling.
5. The worst possible outcome is that the owner will not be able to get the dog to stop pulling during a walk.
6. Communication needs to be very clear and organized. Steps are intended for wheel chair clients. Larger print is also used incase of any eye sight difficulties.
II. Audience
1. The audience has limited mobility and is using wheel chairs. The audience may need larger print. Training a dog not to pull when walking is very important for a client in a wheel chair.
2. The most relevant characteristic is the importance of training for the wheel chair clientele.
III. Context
1. The occasion of communication is anyone who has limited mobility that is interested in training their dog.
2. The place of communication will be in the client’s environment (i.e. neighborhood, park, around town, and inside stores, ect.)
IV. Description of Overall Strategy
1. The audience will need to know what basic tools are used. 6 foot leash, pronged collar (explain how to adjust), and tasty treats!
2. Detailed, clear, and large instructions with visual aid. Pictures will be used of every step with the dog.
V. Choice of Medium
1. Choice of media could be online documents, brochure, a packet, or video
2. For this audience it would be easiest to make a brochure or packet so that it is portable.
VI. Ideas of Arrangement
1. Tools: needed: 6 foot leash, pronged collar, & tasty treats
2. How to adjust the collar-added in instructions
3. Important info before beginning:
-When your dog does what you want marks with “YES” then pause and reward with a treat. Dogs have 3-5 SECONDS to make an association between what is asked and the consequence. If you say “YES” and give a treat at the same time your dog will think he is being rewarded for taking the treat.
-When your dog DOES NOT do what you want, DO NOT SAY “NO”. Instead say “AHH-AHH” or IGNORE the behavior & DO NOT REWARD!
-Dogs learn BEST when using positive reinforcement!
-ONLY give your dog a treat when he does what is asked!
4. The Process:
5. -Directions are organized and clear.
VII. Testing in Communication of Production
1. In order to make sure the piece of communication is successful is by having a person in a wheel chair try out the directions to see if they are easy to use.
2. Another option would be to have fellow classmates or friends try the directions and to keep the client’s best interests in mind to see if the instructions are easy to use.
Design Plan #1
-Your arrangement process is described the most throughly. I like that you say "tasty treats" and I think you should use that in your intructions as well-it gave me a smile and will make the instructions seem more personable.
-Context was talked about the least. I'd like to know more of the places I would be able to get these instructions, like at the vet or a pet store. Also, make sure and make it available to people who want to train their dogs at home, not just at the park and public places.
-The instructions need to be portable so that the audience can take it with them when they walk their dog.
-I think you should also include a voice recorded with instructions on how to walk the dog so that the reader is able to take it with him/her and listen as they teach their dog instead of having to read and teach at the same time.
Design Plan #2
-Your arrangement section was also the best in this plan. You described in good detail the different aspects that you'll cover when writing these instructions.
-As for testing, I think that you should let your grandmother or grandfather read the instructions instead of a classmate to make sure they understand it easily.
-I think that this one will work well for this audience because it will explain in a simple way how to walk your dog.
-I would also possibly make this medium a voice recorded so that the person is able to listen to it as they attempt to teach their dog.
comments...
First of all i love this idea, due to the fact that my doy does not know how to walk with me. So i look forward to reading your instructions!
In my opinion i think you hit all the seven elements as best as you could with your design. You included all seven between both designs and explained both of them in great detail. As for not covering one very thoroughly, I can't seem to find one that you didn't cover. Like i said before you did very well on discribing all of the elements for both of your design plans.
As for connecting with my project, I think that our desing plans connect more than anything over what our actual topics are. Saying that we both have to go through the same processes and come up with different ideas on how to show people how to do our instructions.
Seeing these instructions from a different point of view may help you out so i would say what if you are dealing with an aggressive dog or an abused dog... how will there reactions deal with the owners training ablities?