Meepa Kim's Work Blog #8
This week I focused on revising some parts of my draft based on the client’s opinion. I removed the word “stationary” from the donation part. As other group members suggested, I tried to add some more information on what donations will be used to. However, I couldn’t find any other usage of donation after interviewing the manager of CFRC community. I emailed about this to my group members to hear their opinions. All of our group members shared some similar ideas about our second draft. We had two alternative messages which might distract readers’ attention. We agreed that we had to focus on asking people to volunteer rather than inviting people to the event. Another opinion that we all agreed on was that our brochure was less effective in action call area. I thought this was because we included two different messages on our brochures.
Since this week was the final week, Patrick and other group members cheered up each other and checked if everything was getting done correctly.