Macko Work Blog Week 8
During Week 8, I worked very hard to produce a final draft of our brochure. I began the week by finishing the Group Activity Report and submitted it on Sunday. I then sent out an email to our group outlining the plan for the week. I was in charge of finishing the Caring For Your Pet brochure. I received Pratyush’s text and edited it for a few minor errors. I printed off a copy of our second draft and edited the necessary areas. I then used this to make changes for our final draft. I utilized the instructor comments to fix errors such as those in grammar. I also used the comments made by the humane society. The comments really helped us create a stronger brochure. I fixed the wording of a few areas. I also made the text of the brochure more consistent. In addition, I made sure all the headings were the same. I added a few lines in sections such as cold weather and warm weather tips. After adding all the necessary text, I went through and fixed the consistency problems we were having. The brochure looks much better after these revisions. I sent out an email with the brochure to my group to receive feedback. After receiving the final copy of the other brochure, I posted both brochures as our final drafts online.