Soo Yun Work Blog Week 7
The week 7 was more challenging than last week since there were second draft to due, peer editing and reading response. I revised the general information brochure as the comments from our instructor. There was huge change in the contents since I was confused with The Humane Society in United Sates and Clinton Humane Society in Indiana. So we had to actually change all the information we provided in the first draft into information from Indiana’s Clinton Humane Society into our own words. Bryce sent me an email about the new contents and put those in the brochure with some information added and words polished. I had to delete the banner of the Humane Society since it can cause legal problems. After revising the draft I sent to all our group members for feed back and posted on the draft 2. For peer editing, I made comments for Group 2 and it was interesting to see their brochure since they were doing different subject. I suggested some ideas for the revision and worked on reading response about The 5 minute Brochure Design Trash Test. This gave me a clear idea of the elements of a good brochure and I could find out which part that our brochure needs to be fixed.