Soo Yun Work Blog Week 8
It was last week of making the final revision of the brochure. I was in charge of general information brochure from the beginning so I continued making the brochure look more professional. First I went over the comments of our instructor for the second draft. Then I reviewed the comments from Clinton Humane Society. I started making changes of what our instructor has made and then focused on what Humane Society asked us for. I received email from Bryce about his final revision according to comments from Human Society and with his changes I started making changes compared other comments from our instructor and peer review. Since Humane Society required us for using more cat pictures instead of just using dogs, I searched for some cat pictures that can go along with the brochure. The comments from Humane Society were very helpful and easy to make changes since they told us what they didn’t like about. They used straight words of exactly which part to be revised. I also deleted the whole wildlife control section and instead added some more pictures with slogans in quotation marks. I also deleted the map and put detail direction of going to Humane Society. After I was done with the design and contents, I send email to Kim as final revision and asked her to post it with caring for pet brochure.