This week our group put all of the feedback together and targeted all the problem areas that were
provided in the feedback from the professor. I was unable to meet with thegroup because of conflicting schedules with the rest of the group. However, I was able to talk with Megan on AIM who explained what work had been done, and sent me a revised copy to over any input on have on the revisions. The group was able to discuss the feedback and decide how we were going to change our brochure. Most of the feedback included visual issues as well as some of the brochure's context. Our group's main revision included making sure that the brochure is persuading the audiences to take part in the CFRC either through volunteering or through donations. Another big modification our group made on the brochure was to omit the "What is the CFRC" on the first page of the brochure. The box took up too much space and without it, the audience is still well informed about the organizated. The space also makes
the brochure more pleasing to the eye with less clutter. Overall, our group continued to communicate well and create a successful brochure with the help of the feedback provided to our group from the professor and other students.