This week my group continued to work very well together. Over the weekend, we discussed our plans for finishing our second draft. Because of Pat's work schedule, we agreed to have our draft finished on Monday, rather than Tuesday. Beth was out of town for the week, so she didn't have much input on the second draft. Meepa and I revised our individual sections of text and emailed them along with any other suggestions we had. In my section of text, I changed the format of the information to a list. I think this helped to increase the readability of text. Pat continued to make revisions to the layout and design of the brochure. Pat posted our second draft early Tuesday morning. After putting our brochure to the trash test for this week's reading repsponse, I already have some ideas in mind for our final draft. Some of the portions of the test really brought to my attention some things we were overlooking. For example, I think our group needs to work on the focus of our brochure and having a single message. Once we receieve the comments from the client, my group plans to discuss any changes that need to be made.