LYNCH Work Blog Week #7
This week our group started off by making changes to our second draft. I helped change some of the text, removed some information that was not necessary, and added a few things to the text. Most of the changes that I made corresponded to the feedback that we received on our first draft. I then did a peer review of another group’s brochure and this helped me get some more ideas and see what other groups are doing to make their brochure effective. I then communicated with my group to set up a meeting time so that we could discuss the reviews on our second draft and figure out what we wanted to change and do for our final draft. I took the reading response test and I feel that it was beneficial to see what parts our group needed to focus on and maybe make some changes to. I thought it was also helpful to read the other group members responses and to see where they were coming from as well. I also looked over the reviews that were given to us on our second draft. It gave me some ideas of where we need to start when going over our final draft and some things that need to be changed.