Marschke Work Blog Week 7
This week started off with editing our project for us to resubmit on Tuesday. Sunday and Monday I was able to work a little on revisions but was forces, because of work, to make most on Tuesday. Since I have been in charge of working on the Humane Society brochure that is the one that I worked on editing. I looked at the comments that were provided by Ryan and tried to improve the brochure. I ended up changing the back cover to remove the directions and instead put a quote and picture. On the inside of the brochure almost all of the text needed to be reworked. I edited the text and added to the section about adopting from the Humane Society. The addition mainly consisted of reasons why to adopt from your shelter that I found on their website. I also removed one of the pictures that Ryan did not think fit to well on the page. Ryan still did not like the line on top and I am considering the best way to change this. I may add an additional line on the bottom that is smaller to balance it out. When the other members of the group were done with the pet care brochure I posted both in PDF format. The rest of the week consisted of thinking of ways to improve the brochure for our final submission. The five minute test as well as another PDF of comments have helped give us guidance on what corrections we can make for next week. I am looking forward to hearing back from the Humane Society on the brochures and making the last revisions next week.