Lievense Work Blog Week #7
I started the week by making changes to the brochure using the comments from Professor Tirrell and the CFRC. One of my responsibilities for the group was to help write the text, so this is what I focused on. Since I did not help with the first draft because of family problems, I thought it was important to be active in the revising for the second draft. I fixed the small errors in the document and then concentrated on the short paragraphs we have in the brochure. I posted the revised brochure on the wiki page for my group to review. I found the peer review to be helpful because it showed different methods to get our message across. The comments from others in the class have given me ideas on how to make the text of the brochure more consise and successful. I realize now that our brochure is a little overwhelmed with text, so this is something I will discuss with my group. The 5 minute brochure trash test I took will also help my group figure out what areas of the brochure need improvement. I will be joining my group members in meeting on Monday and I will be writing the Group Activity report for this week.