Snyder Work Blog Week 7
This week our group worked on revisions of the brochures. Roy worked up revisions for the humane society brochure while Cristina nad I worked together to spruce up the pet care brochure. I worked mainly on the writing in the brochure while Cristina revised the layout a bit. After doing the 5 minute test with the brochures i have decided that the pet care one really needs some work yet. We reall need to get some of the sections less wordy and easier to read. The brochure would also look nicer if it was easier to follow. This next week we will be working towards completing the final revisions of these brochures by applying the feedback we get from everyone else.