Meepa Kim's work blog week 7
This week our group mainly focused on revising the article of our brochures. This week's reading was very helpful to put variety and rhythm on the sentences of our article. As the instructor commented on my part, the information of donation, I removed the specific person's name and contact information. I inserted the CFRC's contact information instead. In addition, the instructor’s comment that due to the regulation, the donation should be used only for the Christmas Day event but not for other areas of the community was very important information. I removed the part which stated that the leftover of donation would be used for other areas of the CFRC’s activity.
From next week, our group members will be focusing on making the content of the article have clearer audience and purpose. I expect our group will edit the article to make them look like that it has been written by one person.