English 420Y - Business Writing Online

Attached is a color version and gray version!

Attached are both of the final brochures.

I have attached both of our final brochures.

Attached is the color and grayscale versions of our final brochure.

This week I worked on revising the general information brochure. The Clinton County Humane Society offered many suggestions. It seemed like there were a lot of suggestions that would drastically change how our brochure was designed and the content within the brochure. After looking through the changes and actually making the changes, they really did not add much. All of the changes to the brochure made our brochure look really professional and it is hopefully what the humane society wants to see in a brochure that they could really use.

Attached are our final drafts of our two brochures.

I feel that our group made a lot of progress this week and were able to improve and finish our final drafts. The first thing I did was go over the comments and our draft two brochures. I then made some changes to our draft and made some suggestions of some things that I thought we needed to look over. I then posted the revised draft with the changes I had made and with suggestions for changes that needed to be made on the wiki page. I attended our group meeting on AIM and afterwards I posted on the wiki page what we had discussed and what we each were going to do to finish our final draft.

After going through the past 2 weeks and having 2 drafts on the brochures, I felt pretty confident in my group's work. We had received positive feedback from both our instructor and our peers and our major strength seemed to be our brochures "professionalism". Then the client comments came into play and I don't know how the rest of my group felt, but I was kind of let down by their comments. Some of the things they said, while not mean in any way, rubbed me the wrong way. The biggest thing was that they said our brochure was boring, BORING!

This week began with an e-mail I sent out about meeting on Monday to begin talking about our final draft. We did end up actually getting together because Marius was not around and I had a severe migraine, so we decided to postpone the work until Tuesday. When Tuesday came around, Marius had done some work on the project but did not show up to our meeting. Erik was around for a brief time, but disappeared shortly after. Melissa M. and I collaborated on the final draft of the brochure and decided that we needed to add pictures and a background.

Prof. Tirrell's Group 3 Final Draft attached.