1. What can the writer do to make the resume better tailored to the specific job being applied for?
I think the writer has done a great job and if resume seems very job specific
2. Is the layout and design pleasing to the eye? Make at least one suggestion for improving it.
According to me the layout and design doesn’t seem fine. I think it just has too much data in it. I think it looks too crammed which hits the eyes.
3. Does the resume fit comfortably within the page (as opposed to being squished in or stretched out)? What can the writer do to improve it?
The resume does fit comfortably within the page, but probably you remove a few points and make it specific.
4. Is it easily readable (no confusing fonts, clearly marked sections)? What improvements can be made?
Yes the resume is readable with no confusing fonts and clearly marked sections.
5. Does it use typography (including headers and bold and italics) appropriately and effectively?
Excellent use of typography, it highlights every necessary aspect.
6. Is the most important information located on the left side of the page and near the top whenever possible? Identify at least one part that could be better placed.
Your address section seems fines. I would not prefer any changes.
7. Does the content of the resume support the objective (if there is one)? Explain.
There is no objective so cant comment.
8. Is the resume too short? Where can it elaborate? Job skills? Responsibilities? Education?
I think it’s not short but a little crammed I think you should remove a little points from your job responsibilities.
9. Is material sequenced in order of importance and relevance?
I think the order used is just fine.
10. Do bulleted items begin with action verbs? Are list items ordered in terms of importance?
The use of action verbs is done very efficiently.
11. Does the resume avoid generalities and focus on specific information and professional terminology?
I think most of the things are perfect. I would like you to a little more specific. I mean a little more to the point
12. Does the resume pass the Quadrant, Column, Squint, and Distance tests? Explain how the author might make improvements based on your test results.
The resume seems to pass all the tests, I like would like it to be a littler more open to look more attractive
13. What other observations can you make about the resume?
Overall the resume is good and I think you have shown a very good sense of direction. I have suggested a few things which you might want to change. I think it would be great if you put an Objective also so that it shows the employer what you are wanting out of the job.
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Resume Feedback
1. What can the writer do to make the resume better tailored to the specific job being applied for?
I think the writer has done a great job and if resume seems very job specific
2. Is the layout and design pleasing to the eye? Make at least one suggestion for improving it.
According to me the layout and design doesn’t seem fine. I think it just has too much data in it. I think it looks too crammed which hits the eyes.
3. Does the resume fit comfortably within the page (as opposed to being squished in or stretched out)? What can the writer do to improve it?
The resume does fit comfortably within the page, but probably you remove a few points and make it specific.
4. Is it easily readable (no confusing fonts, clearly marked sections)? What improvements can be made?
Yes the resume is readable with no confusing fonts and clearly marked sections.
5. Does it use typography (including headers and bold and italics) appropriately and effectively?
Excellent use of typography, it highlights every necessary aspect.
6. Is the most important information located on the left side of the page and near the top whenever possible? Identify at least one part that could be better placed.
Your address section seems fines. I would not prefer any changes.
7. Does the content of the resume support the objective (if there is one)? Explain.
There is no objective so cant comment.
8. Is the resume too short? Where can it elaborate? Job skills? Responsibilities? Education?
I think it’s not short but a little crammed I think you should remove a little points from your job responsibilities.
9. Is material sequenced in order of importance and relevance?
I think the order used is just fine.
10. Do bulleted items begin with action verbs? Are list items ordered in terms of importance?
The use of action verbs is done very efficiently.
11. Does the resume avoid generalities and focus on specific information and professional terminology?
I think most of the things are perfect. I would like you to a little more specific. I mean a little more to the point
12. Does the resume pass the Quadrant, Column, Squint, and Distance tests? Explain how the author might make improvements based on your test results.
The resume seems to pass all the tests, I like would like it to be a littler more open to look more attractive
13. What other observations can you make about the resume?
Overall the resume is good and I think you have shown a very good sense of direction. I have suggested a few things which you might want to change. I think it would be great if you put an Objective also so that it shows the employer what you are wanting out of the job.