1. To make the resume better tailored for a specific job, the writer can have an objective sentence that states the position and how the skills of the writer match the position.
2. The overall layout is pleasing to the eye. All of the categories line up which helps the resume look organized and easy to read through. One suggestion is to make a different font or style for experience titles so they stand out more.
3. The resume fits the page perfectly. It is not squeezed in and it is not stretched to fit a page.
4. Everything on the resume is readable and clear. There are no typos and all the sections are clearly marked. One suggestion is to put the reference names in alphabetical order.
5. Typography is used correctly. There is a use of a header of the name and bolded text for the different categories. One suggestion is to use italics for the job titles.
6. All of the information is placed on the left side of place. Everything is indented over correctly also. One item that can be better placed is the order of awards. The rewards could be listed from the most current to the latest.
7. There is no objective. Instead there is a summary. An objective gives the employer clear information regarding what the writer is looking for and how his skills apply to the position.
8. The resume is thorough on the experience and accomplishments, but it needs to include the education. The education category should include the school, major, month and year graduation, and possibly the GPA.
9. The information is sequenced in the order of the most present time in the experiences. The experiences are listed as the most recent job first.
10. The resume uses a good choice of action verbs to clearly explain what tasks of the job were performed. For the second job for Mark Justice, a suggestion is to add at least one more bulleted item to give a more clear idea of what tasks were performed.
11. The resume focuses on specific information by using good action verbs to describe the jobs, and by giving details to the accomplishments.
12. I think that all the tests were passed. The resume is spaced out well and all the columns match up all the way through.
13. My overall observation of the resume that time was spent on the resume to make it look clean and organized. By adding the education category and by being more specific with an objective, the resume will be a stand out.
Comments
Resume Peer Editing - Bryce
1. To make the resume better tailored for a specific job, the writer can have an objective sentence that states the position and how the skills of the writer match the position.
2. The overall layout is pleasing to the eye. All of the categories line up which helps the resume look organized and easy to read through. One suggestion is to make a different font or style for experience titles so they stand out more.
3. The resume fits the page perfectly. It is not squeezed in and it is not stretched to fit a page.
4. Everything on the resume is readable and clear. There are no typos and all the sections are clearly marked. One suggestion is to put the reference names in alphabetical order.
5. Typography is used correctly. There is a use of a header of the name and bolded text for the different categories. One suggestion is to use italics for the job titles.
6. All of the information is placed on the left side of place. Everything is indented over correctly also. One item that can be better placed is the order of awards. The rewards could be listed from the most current to the latest.
7. There is no objective. Instead there is a summary. An objective gives the employer clear information regarding what the writer is looking for and how his skills apply to the position.
8. The resume is thorough on the experience and accomplishments, but it needs to include the education. The education category should include the school, major, month and year graduation, and possibly the GPA.
9. The information is sequenced in the order of the most present time in the experiences. The experiences are listed as the most recent job first.
10. The resume uses a good choice of action verbs to clearly explain what tasks of the job were performed. For the second job for Mark Justice, a suggestion is to add at least one more bulleted item to give a more clear idea of what tasks were performed.
11. The resume focuses on specific information by using good action verbs to describe the jobs, and by giving details to the accomplishments.
12. I think that all the tests were passed. The resume is spaced out well and all the columns match up all the way through.
13. My overall observation of the resume that time was spent on the resume to make it look clean and organized. By adding the education category and by being more specific with an objective, the resume will be a stand out.