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Cristina Villacres Resume

Wed, 06/20/2007 - 22:00 — mvillacr

I know I need a lot of help. Thank you in advance for any comments!

Cristina

Comments

Wed, 06/20/2007 - 22:31 — rmarschk
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1. I thought with the experience that you have you did a good job tailoring you resume for this position. In the future you may want to work on expanding you work experience because many employers like to see a substantial amount of experience.
2. With your layout I would make sure that all of your bullets all aligned correctly and if you have to type on the next line that it also lines up with the indent of the first part of the sentence. I would also make the headings and the places you worked a different font or different size.
3. I think you did a good job adjusting your resume so that it fit on a page. It did not look to stretched out or smashed onto the page.
4. I think the resume is fairly easy to look at. I think if you adjust some of the things I mentioned before it would make it look more appealing and easy to read.
5. Yes I think you did a good job using bold effectively but you may want to play with italics or other fonts to see if you like using them too.
6. You did a nice job aligning everything to the left and to the center that was important.
7. Yes your content all related back to the objective stated at the top of the resume. Your experience and education sections all related to the job.
8. For the experiences that you have now I think that your resume is good. In the future I would just work on expanding on my job experiences so that this section can be more detailed.
9. Your education section is listed in order of sequence and importance so you did a nice job with that.
10. I think you did a nice job on starting bulleted points with action words. However you may want to avoid starting with the same work twice.
11. I think you could elaborate on the experience section including more professional and technical terminology.
12. I thought your resume was appealing to the eye. It did pass all of the tests however you may want to have the headings centered to improve the balance of your resume.
13. Overall I thought this resume was well thought out and you did a good job.

Wed, 06/20/2007 - 22:51 — RachB487
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Resume Response

1. You could try to point out skills or things you did at work that sound more finance oriented.
2. The overall look is pleasing; however, I think your job title should be listed first and in bold print, rather than the name of the city.
3. The information fits very well in the page. It isn't stretched at all.
4. The sections are marked well and easy to follow.
5. The titles of the sections make good use of bold and capital letters. The only think I would consider changing is adding bold print to the job title.
6. Most of the information is properly placed; however, the job title should probably be the first thing listed under work experience.
7. The information in the resume supports the objective.
8. The resume may be a little too short. Maybe you could elaborate on the work experience or skills section.
9. Yes, the material is very well ordered. The most important parts are listed first.
10. The bulleted points begin with action verbs and are listed in order of appearance.
11. The objective may be too general. You could specify the company.
12. The resume passes the tests. I think the overall layout is very well done.
13. The only other suggestion I have is to elaborate more on the details of each section.