1. The letters form is very well laid out and it does contain all of the necessary components. Maybe could have put a decorative live to divide up your address and date/beginning of letter.
2. The writer did use block format and it looks very professional.
3. The letter is very formal and it suits the occasion very well. I think it is perfect because it is formal but not too generic. Possibly it could have a bit more formal when she talked about her Potbelly’s position.
4. The tone is perfect his is very enthusiastic but it doesn’t sound like she bragging. She sounds very highly qualified for the position but his is not bragging about her past positions to the point of it being annoying.
5. All of the grammar, spelling and mechanics look correct and I don’t see any errors.
Content/Rhetorical Context
1. The cover letter the ad very well and it also has a lot of information about her major and the company. It seems as though he has a lot of keywords to point out her qualifications for this job.
2. Yes, the writer mentioned specific reasons why she applied for the position. She wants to be an accountant and she thinks it will allow her to be exposed to the accounting and auditing fields. It is a very good reason and a very good thing to put in the cover letter.
3. She does identify specific skills very well.
4. Yes, the introductory paragraph has all of these important aspects.
5. Yes, the conclusion has contact information for further discussion and it has a very high note saying that I look forward to hearing from you and thank you for your time.
6. I think that the letter could be a little more formal and possibly a little more design to it.
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Form and Style
1. The letters form is very well laid out and it does contain all of the necessary components. Maybe could have put a decorative live to divide up your address and date/beginning of letter.
2. The writer did use block format and it looks very professional.
3. The letter is very formal and it suits the occasion very well. I think it is perfect because it is formal but not too generic. Possibly it could have a bit more formal when she talked about her Potbelly’s position.
4. The tone is perfect his is very enthusiastic but it doesn’t sound like she bragging. She sounds very highly qualified for the position but his is not bragging about her past positions to the point of it being annoying.
5. All of the grammar, spelling and mechanics look correct and I don’t see any errors.
Content/Rhetorical Context
1. The cover letter the ad very well and it also has a lot of information about her major and the company. It seems as though he has a lot of keywords to point out her qualifications for this job.
2. Yes, the writer mentioned specific reasons why she applied for the position. She wants to be an accountant and she thinks it will allow her to be exposed to the accounting and auditing fields. It is a very good reason and a very good thing to put in the cover letter.
3. She does identify specific skills very well.
4. Yes, the introductory paragraph has all of these important aspects.
5. Yes, the conclusion has contact information for further discussion and it has a very high note saying that I look forward to hearing from you and thank you for your time.
6. I think that the letter could be a little more formal and possibly a little more design to it.