Cover Letter

mfaslam's picture

I havent really used a cover letter in my job search process. This actually is the first for me so I would definitely appreciate some feedback.

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kmayes's picture

Cover Letter Peer Edit

Form and Style
1. Yes, all necessary components were in place.
2. All information is aligned to the left margin.
3. The letter is formal, and I think that is suitable for this type of position.
4. The professional tone used, is very necessary for this type of position.
5. No, there are no errors to my knowledge.

Content/Rhetorical Context
1. The letter does specify the qualities and note the keywords for this job.
2. Yes, the writer goes in to detail why he applied for the job and why he is interested.
3. Yes, the writer includes skills and reasons these would benefit the company.
4. The introductory paragraph is all inclusive.
5. Yes, the conclusion gives the correct info for contacting him.
6. This one would be hard to revise in my eyes. I think you have done a fine job. The details and the depth you went into them about are amazing.