Form and Style
1. Yes. Format looks very appealing.
2. Yes. Everything is alligned to the left
3. I think the style of this letter is very balanced
4. The tone seems to be very enthusiastic and you seem pretty well qualified for the position
5. I cant seem to find any. As a suggestion, it might be good idead to align the blocks as that looks a little nicer.
Content/Rhetorical Context
1. The keywords are very well used.
2. You can definitey relate from your experiences as to why you want to be a part of this industry.
3. Yes.
4. Yes.
5. Contact information has been provided and the letter does end on a very high note
6. Why you want to be a part of this specific organization should be a little more clear. Overall, a very good piece of writing
1)Yes, It looks really good
2) Yes
3) Yes. You used a really good formal tone.
4) No, everything looks great!
Content/Rhetorical Context
1) It sounds great as is but I would include a little more about your skills.
2)Yes.
3)Yes
4)Yes
5)No, Even though your address is mentioned on the top, I would re-mention it in the last paragraph and mention how you would like to be contacted for an interview.
6) I think it looks good as is, I would however mention your address at the bottom.
Comments
Cover Letter peer review
Form and Style
1. Yes. Format looks very appealing.
2. Yes. Everything is alligned to the left
3. I think the style of this letter is very balanced
4. The tone seems to be very enthusiastic and you seem pretty well qualified for the position
5. I cant seem to find any. As a suggestion, it might be good idead to align the blocks as that looks a little nicer.
Content/Rhetorical Context
1. The keywords are very well used.
2. You can definitey relate from your experiences as to why you want to be a part of this industry.
3. Yes.
4. Yes.
5. Contact information has been provided and the letter does end on a very high note
6. Why you want to be a part of this specific organization should be a little more clear. Overall, a very good piece of writing
cover letter peer edit
1)Yes, It looks really good
2) Yes
3) Yes. You used a really good formal tone.
4) No, everything looks great!
Content/Rhetorical Context
1) It sounds great as is but I would include a little more about your skills.
2)Yes.
3)Yes
4)Yes
5)No, Even though your address is mentioned on the top, I would re-mention it in the last paragraph and mention how you would like to be contacted for an interview.
6) I think it looks good as is, I would however mention your address at the bottom.