JetBlue Press Release
Please leave comments on my press release. I have never written one of these and found it extremely difficult. Thanks for your help!
Please leave comments on my press release. I have never written one of these and found it extremely difficult. Thanks for your help!
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Overall I think your press release looks pretty good. You put the news part in the first paragraph like we were supposed to. You had contact information and used language that was not too hard to understand. The information, grammar, and spelling all look good. In the first paragraph you made JetBlue two words and only one in the second and third. Just make sure that you keep that consistent. To me this looks good but you may want to look over some other press releases to see if you get any ideas from them that could make your press release better.
Peer Edit for Press Release
Wow, that was a very well written press release. It was very easy to read and flowed along very easily. I like your use of transitional words and also how you incorporated a lot of information reguarding where to contact the company, where to find the Customer Bill of Rights, and so on. I also like how you emphasized your appology to the customer and how the company was working to make things better. I tried to find an error or anything to that I would change, but it was very simple and to the point. Sorry I do not have anything to critique, but it was a very nice job!