Your press release is very organized. I liked that you used the logo from JetBlue Airways in your press release. I also like that the contact information is available at the top of the page and reiterated at the bottom of the page, too. The boldness of the type catches the reader's attention. My only recommendations would be to divide the first paragraph into two paragraphs. In the second sentence of the second paragraph, either "a" or "the" should be placed in front of Customer Bill of Rights. Also, in the last sentence of the second paragraph, "are making" should be "is making". Besides those changes, your press release is great. It is directed toward the affected customers as well as the general public. It explains what happened and the steps JetBlue is implementing to ensure an event like this doesn't happen again. Good job!
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Your press release is very organized. I liked that you used the logo from JetBlue Airways in your press release. I also like that the contact information is available at the top of the page and reiterated at the bottom of the page, too. The boldness of the type catches the reader's attention. My only recommendations would be to divide the first paragraph into two paragraphs. In the second sentence of the second paragraph, either "a" or "the" should be placed in front of Customer Bill of Rights. Also, in the last sentence of the second paragraph, "are making" should be "is making". Besides those changes, your press release is great. It is directed toward the affected customers as well as the general public. It explains what happened and the steps JetBlue is implementing to ensure an event like this doesn't happen again. Good job!