Overall, your brochures were a very good start. Specific feedback from me and CFRC is appended below.
The use of a consistent red and green color scheme is good.
The word "dispensed" in the front panel picture caption should be changed.
The text on the front panel of the grayscale version is difficult to read because of a lack of contrast between the tree background and the text.
The "Mission Statement" panel is good, but the contact information should also include the phone number: (765) 742-5046.
The line "Community & Family Resource Center" in the "Mission Statement" panel isn't the same darkness as the rest of the contact info in the grayscale version.
The line "Services that we hold" in the "Mission Statement" panel should be revised.
The tasks listed under "Volunteer Opportunities" and the choices on the volunteer form should be consistent.
The "Volunteer Opportunities" section needs to be streamlined. Remember your audience and medium. No one is going to read that much text on a pamphlet.
The check box symbol isn't correct on the volunteer form.
Instead of the small Christmas tree logo next to the return address, use the official CFRC Christmas Day Dinner logo (Santa with a turkey). The Big Christmas tree on the front panel is fine.
The "Christmas Day Dinner" section needs revision for clarity.
The figures in the picture caption and the "Christmas Day Dinner" section aren't consistent.
The statement that every person gets a coat in the "Christmas Day Dinner Section" should be changed. Coats are made available free of cost.
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Group 3 Brochure Draft 1