These brochures would benefit from a rethink of the document's visual design. You must be able to grab your potential reader immediately. Consider how choices like color scheme, placement of text and images, leading, kerning, and font size affect the readability of your current brochure. For example, the "Volunteer Positions" section of your brochure has a great deal of text compressed into a small area without a clear organizational structure. Given that brochures only get a few moments of a reader's time, you want to make sure that you are using them effectively.
Professionalism is also vital to this document. Currently, the arrangement of text and images doesn't seem to have a strong organization, making the document look unprofessional. Details like all the headings in the "Volunteer Positions" section being hyphenated also make a difference, as does the box at the bottom of the "Volunteer Positions" section pushing out to the edge of the paper.
Don't be afraid to use similar documents for comparison. Determine what effective brochures share. Think about what is going to make the audience for your brochure do what you want them to do. After all, the purpose of this document is to cause action in the real world.
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These brochures would benefit from a rethink of the document's visual design. You must be able to grab your potential reader immediately. Consider how choices like color scheme, placement of text and images, leading, kerning, and font size affect the readability of your current brochure. For example, the "Volunteer Positions" section of your brochure has a great deal of text compressed into a small area without a clear organizational structure. Given that brochures only get a few moments of a reader's time, you want to make sure that you are using them effectively.
Professionalism is also vital to this document. Currently, the arrangement of text and images doesn't seem to have a strong organization, making the document look unprofessional. Details like all the headings in the "Volunteer Positions" section being hyphenated also make a difference, as does the box at the bottom of the "Volunteer Positions" section pushing out to the edge of the paper.
Don't be afraid to use similar documents for comparison. Determine what effective brochures share. Think about what is going to make the audience for your brochure do what you want them to do. After all, the purpose of this document is to cause action in the real world.