Peer Edit
I really liked this brochure. The cover works well incorporating a font that is very Christmas like and keeps a sense of theme throughout the brochure. The red and green colors contrast well as well as stick with the Christmas theme. You did a good job using the different font types from sans serif to serif fonts between the header of the paragraph and the content of the paragraphs. In the About Us panel of the brochure, I like how you followed a pattern of numbering what the CFRC does and then use a verb to start the explanation of what they do. This is a good use of repetition as on page 574 of the Thomson Handbook. The detachable volunteer and donations form is a nice touch. It is really easy to read and use in order to offer your services. I would suggest that you make the spacing larger between the name, address, phone number lines so that the person writing it has more space. It would be tough to fit in there handwriting it. ON the donations panel, I would suggest not underlining the "Supporting CFRC with your donation will enable us to: as it seems like this is too long to underline. Also consider making the picture of the kid and Santa larger to fill the space. There seems to be wasted space with just the red box. OTher than that, this is a pretty good brochure.