English 420Y - Business Writing Online

I really liked this brochure. The cover works well incorporating a font that is very Christmas like and keeps a sense of theme throughout the brochure. The red and green colors contrast well as well as stick with the Christmas theme. You did a good job using the different font types from sans serif to serif fonts between the header of the paragraph and the content of the paragraphs. In the About Us panel of the brochure, I like how you followed a pattern of numbering what the CFRC does and then use a verb to start the explanation of what they do.

I wanted to provide some notes on the Service Learning Project that may answer questions arising in the groups. First, I can see from my email box that you are actively trying to contact each other, and that you all have very busy schedules that are difficult to coordinate. Email and instant messenger are both good tools, but we have also instituted wiki pages that allow each group to post content that members of the group can read. I see some of you are taking advantage of this, and I recommend all the groups use them to post comments, messages, and files.

Because this project is not built around topics relevant to your majors, I have grouped students randomly based on their position in the Drupal users list. I will email each group to initiate contact between members. The groups are listed below: