Reading Response Week 7
- I find our brochure to be very appealing to our audince because its main goal is to get people to want to save or rescue an animal. Adding the pictures of cute puppies as we did really pulls on our customers emotions. Everyone always wants to save an dog or cat and our brochure really allows our customer to feel that.
- I feel that our brochure has a very professional look to it, with the aid of Microsoft Publisher. This allowed us to use add pictures and other information to let the customer know that we are very professional about what we do.
- I feel that the readability of our document is very well done. It is easy to follow with the different types of formatting such as bullets. It lets the reader find what they are looking for with specific areas being highlighted in bold.
- Our brochure did not involve very difficult terminology due to the audience and type of business we are dealing with.
- After compairing information with other groups, our brochure has a very clear message it is trying to get across. There is not to much information where the reader is left trying to dig out what they want, and not to little information where the reader is left asking questions.
- After reading some of what my group members have had to say, I think they are right when it comes to making and action call where we need to tell the reader to make a call, drop us an email, or stop by for a visit. I think that in communicating this, it helps them feel welcome.
I feel that our strongest points in the brochures were in the readability of them because they flow very easily and do not contain way to much inforamation. The action call obviously needs to be added so that would have to be our weakest spot.
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I agree that our strongest point in our brochures is professionalism. I am really glad that we used publisher, it really made it simple to make the brochure look professional. I think we did a pretty good job with readability too, none of the brochures look over crowded and the use of pictures also makes it easier to read. I do think, however, that we need to work on language a little in our pet care brochure; I think with a little bit of work we can correct all the grammar mistakes and also make it more personal. Also as far as the action call is concerned ,we did mention the humane society's phone number at the end for them to call the humane society but maybe adding the e-mail add or telling them to stop by is a good idea.
I think we have done a pretty good job in totality; we just need a little polishing.