English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

This week I did a lot of editing of my section of the white paper. First I needed to have my structure match that of the other two router sections. In our initial rough draft the sub-headers were different so I needed to adjust my subjects for the right sections. I also needed to add information about my router being draft-n capable. There was also information that needed to be given about the hardware of my device. I added things such as the functionality of the power plug, the vertical configuration of the router, and the mobility of its antennas. After doing those things I proof read my information and found minor errors to change such as spelling and punctuation. After sending in my info to be consolidated to the other group info it was brought to my attention that I needed to have my pictures in JPEG format in order to give a good resolution. So, I went back to my sources website and reacquired the pictures then saved them into the proper format so that they could be used in my section. The addition of the photos and new information in my section helped bring the word count of all sections to the same level and the volume (page wise) very close so that each router had a fair shake in comparison. I also wrote up and handed in this week’s group activity report.