English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

Jason Flittner – Individual Activity Report

This week has gone very well; our team has been collaborating and finalizing our ideas for our final draft of our white paper. After completing and receiving evaluation on our draft white paper we realized that we had a solid base to finish up our final draft. Nathaniel’s evaluation did make some good points in regards to removing some wording in our paper that could make it seem biased. Our draft also lacked some of the essential non-reader elements, such as lists, charts, and graphs. We are adding many non-reader elements to our final draft in order to support the information contained throughout the paper.

Overall this project has gone very well and I have learned quite a bit in regards to white papers. This week has proven to increase my knowledge even further. I have realized some of the main benefits and details in the creation of a white paper. I look forward to pulling everything together this evening and getting our white paper perfect for submission. I think that everyone in the group will be happy to have it completed and to get our minds focused on studying for finals.

Thanks a lot

JFlitt