English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

Individual Activity Report for Group 8 – Week 16

In week 16 the final touches went on our (Group white paper. On Monday, I met with my group online to discuss the final steps in completing the white paper project. After discussing the final steps, I slightly edited the document by formatting a few mistakes made on the rough draft and made a list of sources that we used in the paper. I then emailed the white paper and the sources to Michael Sherid for final editing. After countless emails with the group the final draft took shape. The group decided to take out a portion of our paper and add a summary and works citied page. The overall flow of the paper began to work a lot better.

To end the week, I had a phone conversation with Michael Sherid to review all of the changes that he made to the paper. The final draft looked great and not much had to be changed when running through the paper with him. I recommended that the sources be made alphabetical and the document was finished. If no other problems were found the document was ready to be handed in. The paper looked great and the project was definitely an experience.