English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

During the final week of our white paper project I have done a couple of things. After our initial meeting we discussed possible changes to make to each of our following sections flow better in the overall scheme of the paper. I needed to fix my section by focusing on the benefits, drawbacks, and conclusion of Google Documents. During my section of the rough draft I made a debate/comparison between that and Microsoft SharePoint. I realized the error in doing this and corrected my section for our final paper. I had to rework my entire section but that was OK with me. In the end I liked how flowed. It felt like it was a part of something instead of having an individual voice in a group of many. That is not how a group paper should be. It needs to have one solid voice so it does not confuse the reader. I have better understanding of that now. At the end of this project I learned how to write a proper white paper. I felt that this can help me in the future of my career path. It helps to be multi-talented so that one eventually gets promoted in the workplace.