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Human Capital Analyst - Advanced Quantitative Services (AQS)

Location: Los Angeles, California
Firm Service: Human Capital

Reference Code: S08NATCF08DEC-HC

Type of Position: Full-time

Job Description

The job that I chose to apply for is an O&M operations site supervisor at the Johnson Controls facility in West Lafayette, In. There are many reasons that I feel this job is right for me. First all, Johnson Controls is a global company that focuses on growth. This is appealing to me because I know that I want to work for a company that is moving forward and not backwards. Secondly, this position fits in very well with my major. Since my degree will be in OLS, and I have concentrated on manufacturing, this position will sit very well with me.

Here is my resume. Any comments would be much appreciated. Thanks Bryce

Upon completing the resume extravagenza, I have come up with five resumes which deserve a call back. The five resumes are 5,9,14,16 and 20. There were many factors that shaped my decision, but the first item that I looked for was something caught my eye. Each of these resumes had something that caught my attention and intrigued me to read on. As I read on, I found that each of these candidates, were sufficiently educated and set themselves apart from the rest by doing unique. By unique I mean an interesting internship, volunteer work or possibly an ambitious class load.

Job Title: Assistant Manager of Farming Operations Company: Lachmund Grain Farm Supervisor: Kevin Lachmund Date of Employment: 4/2007 - present Skills needed: Good communication skills, be proficient with Microsoft Word and Excel, be able to read and understand engineering diagrams, be able to calculate the cost and benefits of certain decisions, receive and chart commodity prices.

Work Experience
Question No. 1
1. Casa Inglesa Ltda.
a. Assistant Manager
b. Barranquilla, Colombia
c. May 2003 to Aug 2003
d. Rolant Hughes and Elizabeth Angulo
e. Requirements: Pursuing a college degree
2. Vector Marketing Corporation
a. Sales Intern
b. Atlanta, GA
c. May 2004 to July 2004
d. Alan Blum
e. Requirements: Pursuing college degree, good communication skills, responsibility , dedication.
3. Deloitte and Touché
a. Audit and Tax Internship
b. Atlanta, GA
c. Jan 2005 to Aug 2006
d. Stephanie Crawford

Here is my cover letter!

Here is my cover letter. Please make comments!

Comments appreciated.

Any comments would be appreciated!