English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

During this week starting from Monday (20th) to today, Friday (24th), our group has primarily worked on creating the rough draft of the White Paper.

Starting this week our group tried to get a good start of what applying our research and writing small sections over our topics. Joey submitted his portion on our common area, Microsoft live early this week. His topic is discussing the technical requirements, hardware, dimensions, and other aspects that are comparing the phones. He also provides information that contributes to the research of other parts. Zebulon posted his entry and research discussing public opinion. In his portion, he discusses how the public feels about each of the phones and what main differences of each phone are and how it benefits the user to each of the three phones. Scott was in charge of two parts, phone pricing and phone service. He compares the phone pricing by placing the minute service and data packages in an excel spread sheet. He also compared costumer service and reliability. Emil is doing two jobs as well; he is working on combing all of the parts with adding his portion in. His portion is mainly comparing the types of software of each phone. He elaborates on how different each phone’s navigability is different and what each phone is capable of. Emil has gone through each of the portions and worked on the flow of each part, making it easier for the audience to read and feel like one document rather than multiple components thrown together.

Overall, the group has done well with researching and compiling all of the information into one document. This week’s communication has improved early in the week we tried to make sure all of our parts were done and put together by Friday evening so we all can revise the White Paper draft.