English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

This report is the summary of my individual progress toward the White Paper project. This week is primarily objective was to complete the final draft for the White Paper Project; starting from last Monday (April 25) to today (May 3).
This week mainly consisted of editing the rough draft by making corrections toward grammatical errors, adding references, and making correct in text citations. I made my contribution a little later in the week. Between everyone working on their parts and creating multiple versions of the same document out, I decided to wait until they made their own corrections; the main points that I changed were adding my references and adding my in text citations.

For this week, I again wrote the group activity report that was due Friday. In this last report there was not a lot of detailed information developed this week to post in the blog.

Overall, this week was very productive the communication was a lot better than previous weeks. Everyone worked well together and we were able to produce a great informative document that will allow people to develop their own opinions about each phone that we analyzed. To me this project was successful, and I learned a great deal from it.