English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

Bill, your resume is very clean and well organized overall, and I have a few comments about it:

You provide two addresses on your resume. A lot of people do this, but I have seen companies sometimes get confused as to which address they should use. It’s best to just provide one address so that they have an easy way of contacting you.

I am consumed as to why you mention how many participants per unit of time you obtain information from. How did you achieve this and why is that relevant to your neuroscience job?

I like how you used statistics such as “increasing sales by 10% in two months”. It shows real results. The job is not related to neuroscience but it does show you are more than just book smart.

Please elaborate more on what you mean by “creative solutions to unique problems” at ACE. Your statement is very vague.

Your education section has some misalignment in the second column. Perhaps those are indented bullets, but it doesn’t look very clean. The rest of the resume looks great though.

You list as having two majors, but just one major GPA. Is that the average of the two? Perhaps it would make sense to list each one’s GPA separately?

You don’t have to list all of the semesters in which you received honors. Just mention how many there are.
You should remove the last page from the document – it’s blank. Your use of dashes after the companies is a bit weird, the dashes are not necessary.