Well from looking at your resume I see a few things you might want to correct.
Starting at the top you might want to consider listing your addresses down instead across as it makes it easier for the recruiter to scan it. At least that’s what I learned last semester in my interviewing class. Also, we learned that some of our resumes stay in their system for awhile. That is why we should list how long we will be at our apartments or dorms when we are at college. Also for your Phone number, is that a cell phone or home phone number? It would be nice to specify which one it is.
As for your Objective, I found it too long and wordy. Using the word “excellent” seemed unprofessional. Can you back up your excellent skills? Either way, I would reword it.
Skills section needed some work. Say what you did in the workplace or your classes instead of saying you have “Excellent interpersonal skills.” Looking further into your resume it should look like your employment history duties. It shows what you did to help the company and what you can do to help them.
I would move the Education section above the Skills section of your resume. Other than that it looked great.
The employment history section looks good as well. You clearly state the place of business, the responsibilities you carried out, as well as listing it in reverse chronological order.
All in all it is a fine resume, not a lot to fix if you choose to as it’s just my opinion on what could use work.
Resume Review
Well from looking at your resume I see a few things you might want to correct.
Starting at the top you might want to consider listing your addresses down instead across as it makes it easier for the recruiter to scan it. At least that’s what I learned last semester in my interviewing class. Also, we learned that some of our resumes stay in their system for awhile. That is why we should list how long we will be at our apartments or dorms when we are at college. Also for your Phone number, is that a cell phone or home phone number? It would be nice to specify which one it is.
As for your Objective, I found it too long and wordy. Using the word “excellent” seemed unprofessional. Can you back up your excellent skills? Either way, I would reword it.
Skills section needed some work. Say what you did in the workplace or your classes instead of saying you have “Excellent interpersonal skills.” Looking further into your resume it should look like your employment history duties. It shows what you did to help the company and what you can do to help them.
I would move the Education section above the Skills section of your resume. Other than that it looked great.
The employment history section looks good as well. You clearly state the place of business, the responsibilities you carried out, as well as listing it in reverse chronological order.
All in all it is a fine resume, not a lot to fix if you choose to as it’s just my opinion on what could use work.