First you may want to specify whether the phone number is a home phone or cell. If you have both or another address it would be best to include it. Also, I think you should put a space between “(219)” and “201.”
Your objective is pretty bland. You should think of something to say to the company that you want to do that would help them out.
In education you right aligned your expected date of graduation but nothing else in the document is right aligned. I would right align the rest of your dates as well to be better aesthetically. Also, I would have the text for the “Related course work” go all the way to the end of the line instead of the quick wrap around. Along with that, I would have the hanging indent of that list go further to the right than the beginning of the word “Related.” And finally, the list itself is kind of long. You may want to consider taking out simple things like Office, Auto CAD, etcetera.
I like your setup of the experience and skills sections. Nearly all the bullets stay to one line and you make good use of white space to section it off. However, I think the spacing just before the last section, “Communication,” is different from the rest. It looks tighter like it should have been one and a half spaced but it was single spaced. Also, your spacing before and after the lines you use to section off the paper seem inconsistent.
Lastly, the font is professional but does not really help the resume stand out. I like your format overall. It's can be easily scanned.
Resume Draft review 2
First you may want to specify whether the phone number is a home phone or cell. If you have both or another address it would be best to include it. Also, I think you should put a space between “(219)” and “201.”
Your objective is pretty bland. You should think of something to say to the company that you want to do that would help them out.
In education you right aligned your expected date of graduation but nothing else in the document is right aligned. I would right align the rest of your dates as well to be better aesthetically. Also, I would have the text for the “Related course work” go all the way to the end of the line instead of the quick wrap around. Along with that, I would have the hanging indent of that list go further to the right than the beginning of the word “Related.” And finally, the list itself is kind of long. You may want to consider taking out simple things like Office, Auto CAD, etcetera.
I like your setup of the experience and skills sections. Nearly all the bullets stay to one line and you make good use of white space to section it off. However, I think the spacing just before the last section, “Communication,” is different from the rest. It looks tighter like it should have been one and a half spaced but it was single spaced. Also, your spacing before and after the lines you use to section off the paper seem inconsistent.
Lastly, the font is professional but does not really help the resume stand out. I like your format overall. It's can be easily scanned.
Shane