The User-Centered Approach: Effectively Instructing End Users

jstn's picture

     The majority of the information presented in chapter 19 of TCT is fairly new to me, at least from a low level perspective. Although the aspects that are outlined throughout the chapter are common, the ways in which they are utilized to produce clear and effective descriptions for users are relatively new in concept. For example, chapter 19 presents formatting and structure guidelines as well as how to relate the descriptions to users through the use of senses, similes, analogies, metaphors, and graphics. Although I’ve not written many technical descriptions, in my line of work I reference them often and can see how these methods and techniques will prove effective in the upcoming project as well as throughout my career in information technology.
     Chapter 20 also presents formatting and structure guidelines, but applied to technical instructions. One of the interesting things from this week’s readings is how similar chapters 19 and 20 are, and how often they reference concepts covered previously in this course. For example, each chapter references the importance of research and planning, specifically “the Five-W and How Questions” that we’ve covered a number of times, as well as how to proceed after collecting the necessary research. Chapter 20 also directly references the different categories of a target audience, including primary, secondary, tertiary, and gatekeeper readers, as well as the context in which the documents will be read. Considering these aspects is now part of my standard planning procedure in drafting any documents. For instance, recently I was tasked with drafting a reference document, similar to a White Paper, regarding a Java application I had written for ITaP. In doing so, I used the techniques and guidelines we’ve covered throughout this course, many of which are also covered in chapters 19 and 20, to anticipate the needs and reading contexts of those that would use it. I had to account for the direct users of the application, who are less experienced; management, who is concerned more with tangible benefits than application logic; and fellow programmers that would maintain the application, who are considered to be subject matter experts. I feel the result was infinitely more professional and effective than anything I could have drafted prior to this course.
     As far as instructions are concerned, it is never wise to treat end-users like ‘idiots.’ Actually, it’s never wise to treat anyone like an idiot, but definitely avoid doing so when trying to relay information to someone that likely doesn’t want to be listening anyways. This is precisely why; most users don’t want to read instructions in the first place so demeaning them will not prove beneficial and further violates the user-centered approach. In treating users like idiots, you instill a negative perspective in the user and this drawback is obvious as the users will likely not finish reading the document and retrieving the information they desire. Furthermore, users talk, and bad publicity is worse than no publicity.
     Finally, the Common Craft video “Google Docs in Plain English” was an amazing application of the concepts covered in this week’s readings. Its use of animation and graphics, in addition to the overall structure, clearly showed that Common Craft anticipated the needs and familiarity of the end users. The presentation was clear and precise in demonstrating how to begin using Google Docs, as well as the benefits one stands to gain in doing so. I was thoroughly impressed by the effectiveness of this video.

the average user

I think that people are taking the write as if your readers are “idiots” idea way too literally, however I do think that it could be worded better. It just means to write your procedures or instructions so anyone can easily understand them. The truth of the matter is that the average user is an idiot no matter how you look at it. Unless you clearly spell out step by step what they are supposed to do your instructions will consistently be misinterpreted. I think this is why analyzing your audience is so important. Now you shouldn’t treat the reader as if they were an idiot that would just make you an idiot. If you cannot write without talking down to or demeaning the reader than you probably shouldn’t be writing instructions in the first place. It’s important to understand that not everyone will be as knowledgeable as you and that your main goal is to help people.

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secolema's picture

I have to disagree with you when you say “This is precisely why; most users don’t want to read instructions in the first place…” referring to the “idiot” approach. I know that the main reason I skip instructions (and others) is that it takes time and effort to read through the words and the user may think they can accomplish the task faster by doing it on their own and cutting out the research time. That is why I think it is more important to have a good style to your instructions rather than tone (although it is still very important).

Shane

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HiggsBoson's picture

I think what jstn was saying about the reason why people don't want to read instructions was that people don't want to read instructions because they don't want to read them and making them feel stupid is only throwing fuel on the fire. This brings up something that I haven't read in any reading response yet; getting the attention of the reader. That is to say, make the instructions as "fun" or entertaining as possible, just as the google docs video did-which was amazing btw. Also, to one of the two above me, I agree with that observation that the whole "idiot" thing is taken too literally. They are trying to point out that being specific is as important as your target reader demands-which of course requires some insight.

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Nathaniel's picture

Given that these readings can and sometimes do work as review, use your reading responses to add something new to the conversation. As we recommended in the prompt for this week's reading response, point to examples or experiences that allow you to elaborate or highlight (or even complicate) some aspect of the reading. If it is indeed review, then a summary may not be the best response.