Thumbnails use a blue color with regular black typeface. The headers and subheaders are variations of Lucida Grande font and the body text uses Georgia. Dimensions are 9 in H x 7 in W to fit into a smaller instruction book.
Graphics include screen shots of menus and of the entire InDesign workspace combining screen shots with illustrated arrows to point out important features. I have put three sample graphics into one .pdf file for the rough drafts.
Very nice!
I like where you're going with your instructions a lot. I think you have a really unique and attractive look to your design, and that this will help make it stand out to the user. I really like the small adjustments that you made as well, such as the changing font styles. I also think you did a good job of adding color to the instructions, though I think that maybe you could use something else to balance all the blue. I really like the spacing and locations of the graphics, as I think it adds more to the aesthetic appeal of the overall document.
Graphics and Thumbnails instructor feedback: Kristin
This looks solid. The use of accenting in the images is particularly useful. I'm curious to see how these documents develop. The only thing I might mention is that there is a fair amount of variance in the image sizes. This may be necessary, but it may also be possible to make the images a uniform size and highlight only the applicable elements. Consistent repetition of structural elements tends to enhance readability.