I like how you have included a cover page. I think the figure labels are also a great idea. One thing I initially noticed was that some of the designs sort of distracted me from the more important parts of the paper. Also I think a two column format would work best to easily reference figures and graphs that we’ll be using. Other than that I liked the rest of it. As Jack mentioned somewhere else I think we should also look into using more color and different fonts in the headings and such to easily differentiate different sections of the paper.
Great job on including a cover page with this draft. I definitely did not think to make one up and include that in the thumbnail. I like how you including graphics around the sides of the page. This definitely makes the paper more appealing and helps bring the reader into the document. I think that the overall layout can use some editing. I would like to see the graph not be so isolated. The graph being placed where it is now could be taking up some valuable room to put in more information or put text around it more to try and bring it into the paper more.
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I like how you have included a cover page. I think the figure labels are also a great idea. One thing I initially noticed was that some of the designs sort of distracted me from the more important parts of the paper. Also I think a two column format would work best to easily reference figures and graphs that we’ll be using. Other than that I liked the rest of it. As Jack mentioned somewhere else I think we should also look into using more color and different fonts in the headings and such to easily differentiate different sections of the paper.
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Great job on including a cover page with this draft. I definitely did not think to make one up and include that in the thumbnail. I like how you including graphics around the sides of the page. This definitely makes the paper more appealing and helps bring the reader into the document. I think that the overall layout can use some editing. I would like to see the graph not be so isolated. The graph being placed where it is now could be taking up some valuable room to put in more information or put text around it more to try and bring it into the paper more.