I like the front cover of your thumbnail. It makes good use of the colors to draw attention to it but then the green lettering helps people think about “going green”. I like the general layout and overall feel of the text portion. I think that this would work well in our white paper and help give it that professional look it needs to be credible. I think that we could also incorporate some nice graphs and charts like you have an example of in your thumbnail. Overall you did a very nice job and we will have to take bits and pieces from all of our thumbnails to create a good overall design.
I really like the layout that your thumbnail presents. It looks very professional. In particular, I like your use of the text boxes. I think that these could be used to provide the audience with a summary of what they read. Also, since they are just boxes, they could be used for providing the reader with greater detail in some of the more complicated portions of the white paper. Although minor, I really like how the page numbers of the white page are presented. Just like bjdunfor said, the use of green helps push the idea of “going green” to our audience.
I pretty much agree with everything that had already been said. I really liked your cover page. I thought it was a really nice graphic. Bobby’s ‘going green’ idea with the color scheme is something that I hadn’t thought of before, but I think it’s a good idea. The only thing I would like to see is maybe a darker green color. I just don’t like light green, but that’s a personal problem. I also really liked the page numbering. I though it made it more unique. I also liked the use of the text boxes. It seems like that would make it easier to point out some important information.
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I like the front cover of your thumbnail. It makes good use of the colors to draw attention to it but then the green lettering helps people think about “going green”. I like the general layout and overall feel of the text portion. I think that this would work well in our white paper and help give it that professional look it needs to be credible. I think that we could also incorporate some nice graphs and charts like you have an example of in your thumbnail. Overall you did a very nice job and we will have to take bits and pieces from all of our thumbnails to create a good overall design.
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I really like the layout that your thumbnail presents. It looks very professional. In particular, I like your use of the text boxes. I think that these could be used to provide the audience with a summary of what they read. Also, since they are just boxes, they could be used for providing the reader with greater detail in some of the more complicated portions of the white paper. Although minor, I really like how the page numbers of the white page are presented. Just like bjdunfor said, the use of green helps push the idea of “going green” to our audience.
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I pretty much agree with everything that had already been said. I really liked your cover page. I thought it was a really nice graphic. Bobby’s ‘going green’ idea with the color scheme is something that I hadn’t thought of before, but I think it’s a good idea. The only thing I would like to see is maybe a darker green color. I just don’t like light green, but that’s a personal problem. I also really liked the page numbering. I though it made it more unique. I also liked the use of the text boxes. It seems like that would make it easier to point out some important information.