I really like the clashing blue on white text with white on blue used in the table. However, at the same time having all of the main text as one color personally does not mesh for me. I think it might work better if the heading and subheadings had some more differing qualities from the text like an underline. I’m torn on what my favorite table is. This one and Pat’s table are my favorite. I really like the alternating white and grey lines in yours. Lastly, I like your font color the best between all four of our thumbs for this project.
At first glance, I really liked your thumbnail. It has several features that seem as though they'd be appealing to the audience. The color is very pleasing to the eye, although I'm not sure that the text should all be the same color. The headings, subheadings, and comment box are very attractive though. I also like the router specification box, with the gray and white lines for contrast. The corners, however, are square, whereas the comment box is rounded. I think it might be a good idea to stay consistent. Otherwise, this is a great thumbnail, and I think we can incorporate many of its features into the group's design.
I think that this is a very good thumbnail and has a lot of great design things we ought to incorporate into our final paper design. I especially like the table you have with alternating colors to help the reader differentiate between things in the table. I wish I had thought of that for my table in my thumbnail. The biggest thing I think you should change is to differentiate more between the heading and sub headings and the body text. Either by underlining the heading and sub headings or possibly changing the color of them.
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I really like the clashing blue on white text with white on blue used in the table. However, at the same time having all of the main text as one color personally does not mesh for me. I think it might work better if the heading and subheadings had some more differing qualities from the text like an underline. I’m torn on what my favorite table is. This one and Pat’s table are my favorite. I really like the alternating white and grey lines in yours. Lastly, I like your font color the best between all four of our thumbs for this project.
Shane
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At first glance, I really liked your thumbnail. It has several features that seem as though they'd be appealing to the audience. The color is very pleasing to the eye, although I'm not sure that the text should all be the same color. The headings, subheadings, and comment box are very attractive though. I also like the router specification box, with the gray and white lines for contrast. The corners, however, are square, whereas the comment box is rounded. I think it might be a good idea to stay consistent. Otherwise, this is a great thumbnail, and I think we can incorporate many of its features into the group's design.
good design
I think that this is a very good thumbnail and has a lot of great design things we ought to incorporate into our final paper design. I especially like the table you have with alternating colors to help the reader differentiate between things in the table. I wish I had thought of that for my table in my thumbnail. The biggest thing I think you should change is to differentiate more between the heading and sub headings and the body text. Either by underlining the heading and sub headings or possibly changing the color of them.
Patrick Griffin
pgriffin@purdue.edu